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The Moon and Sixpence is a novel by W. Somerset Maugham, 第一段翻譯討論 (部分)

 


《月亮與六便士》傅惟慈 譯, 新潮文庫 368  ,1995/1999    The Moon and Sixpence is a novel by W. Somerset Maugham, 


The Moon and Sixpence is a novel by W. Somerset Maugham, first published on 15 April 1919. It is told in episodic form by a first-person narrator providing a series of glimpses into the mind and soul of the central character, Charles Strickland, a middle-aged English stockbroker, who abandons his wife and children abruptly to pursue his desire to become an artist. The story is, in part, based on the life of the painter Paul Gauguin.

《月亮和六便士》 是威廉·薩默塞特·毛姆的一本小說,以第一人稱通過對中心人物查爾斯·思特里克蘭德(Charles Strickland)心靈的描述,展現一個中年英國股票經紀人如何突然扔下妻子和孩子去追尋成爲藝術家的夢想。故事一說是取材於畫家保羅·高更的生活。


About the title

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According to some sources, the title, the meaning of which is not explicitly revealed in the book, was taken from a review in The Times Literary Supplement of Maugham's novel Of Human Bondage, in which the novel's protagonist, Philip Carey, is described as being "so busy yearning for the moon that he never saw the sixpence at his feet."[3] According to a 1956 letter from Maugham, "If you look on the ground in search of a sixpence, you don't look up, and so miss the moon." Maugham's title echoes the description of Gauguin by his contemporary biographer, Meier-Graefe (1908): "He [Gauguin] may be charged with having always wanted something else."[2]









The Moon and Sixpence by W. Somerset Maugham, 第一段翻譯討論 (部分)


Chapter I
 I confess that when first I made acquaintance with Charles Strickland I never for a moment discerned that there was in him anything out of the ordinary. 
Yet now few will be found to deny his greatness. 

I do not speak of that greatness which is achieved by the fortunate politician or the successful soldier; that is a quality which belongs to the place he occupies rather than to the man; and a change of circumstances reduces it to very discreet proportions.
 The Prime Minister out of office is seen, too often, to have been but a pompous rhetorician, and the General without an army is but the tame hero of a market town. 

The greatness of Charles Strickland was authentic. 
It may be that you do not like his art, but at all events you can hardly refuse it the tribute of your interest.
 He disturbs and arrests. 
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查爾斯·斯特里克蘭的偉大是真實的。 
也許你不喜歡他的藝術,但無論如何你都很難拒絕它對你的興趣的貢獻。
 他擾亂並逮捕。

傅惟慈 譯
....無論如何你不能不對它感到興趣。他的作品使你不能平靜扣緊你的心弦。

The time has passed when he was an object of ridicule, and it is no longer a mark of eccentricity to defend or of perversity to extol him.
 His faults are accepted as the necessary complement to his merits.
 
It is still possible to discuss his place in art, and the adulation of his admirers is perhaps no less capricious than the disparagement of his detractors; but one thing can never be doubtful, and that is that he had genius. 
討論他在藝術中的地位仍然是可能的,他的崇拜者的奉承也許與他的批評者的貶低一樣反复無常。但有一點是不容置疑的,那就是他有天賦。


傅惟慈 譯

他在藝術中的地位儘可以繼續爭論。崇拜者對他的讚頌同貶抑者對他的詆毀固然都可能出於偏頗和任性,但有一點是不容置疑的,那就是他具有天才。

To my mind the most interesting thing in art is the personality of the artist; and if that is singular, I am willing to excuse a thousand faults. I suppose Velasquez was a better painter than El Greco, but custom stales one’s admiration for him: the Cretan, sensual and tragic, proffers the mystery of his soul like a standing sacrifice. 
在我看來,藝術中最有趣的是藝術家的個性;如果這是單一的,我願意原諒一千個錯誤。我認為委拉斯凱茲是一位比埃爾·格列柯更好的畫家,但風俗習慣使人們對他的欽佩不再那麼令人欽佩:克里特島,感性而悲慘,像常備的祭品一樣提供了他靈魂的神秘。

案:STANDING
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remaining in force or use; permanent.
"he has a standing invitation to visit them"


The artist, painter, poet, or musician, by his decoration, sublime or beautiful, satisfies the aesthetic sense; but that is akin to the sexual instinct, and shares its barbarity: he lays before you also the greater gift of himself. To pursue his secret has something of the fascination of a detective story. It is a riddle which shares with the universe the merit of having no answer. The most insignificant of Strickland’s works suggests a personality which is strange, tormented, and complex; and it is this surely which prevents even those who do not like his pictures from being indifferent to them; it is this which has excited so curious an interest in his life and character.

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