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台湾总统蔡英文6月7日接见美国智库“国家亚洲研究局”（The National Bureau of Asian Research）专家团时表示，在安全合作方面，希望川普政府依据《台湾关系法》对台提供协助。与此同时，美国防部在中国军力报告中说不支持台独。有军事专家说，美国对台军售实施尚需一段时间。
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表達的翻譯腔2007.7.6
「《衛報》頭版的報道說，英國誤診的情況嚴重。報道是根據一份研究報告的內容所撰寫的。報告指出，由於醫生的的診斷出現瑕疵，以致有數以千計的人被錯誤告之他們可能會得到有生命威脅的心臟病。」
上述為BBC的中文（翻譯），表達能力太差。hc改成：
『據《衛報》頭版報道，英國誤診的情況嚴重。根據某研究報告，由於醫生例行的風險計算方式有瑕疵，以致數以千計的人被誤告他們可能會有心臟病，有生命威脅。』
1.5m wrongly told they risk heart disease
Misdiagnosis has led to massive over-prescribing of drugs - BMJ study
Polly Curtis, health correspondent
Friday July 6, 2007
The Guardian
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受眾 audiences or the audience 20007.9.20
受眾，是中國對於媒體接受者(觀眾/聽眾/讀者)的翻譯。
"不過﹐“中國製造”聲望的嚴重滑坡不僅威脅了中國自己的經濟﹐也威脅了進口中國商品的西方企業。在那些愈發贊同採取一定措施保護本土市場的消費者中﹐外國製造商不誠實的形像找到了很好的受眾。對中國商品信任的喪失也可能為全球貿易系統帶來負面影響。"
audience (GROUP OF PEOPLE) Show phonetics
group noun [C]
the group of people gathered in one place to watch or listen to a play, film, someone speaking, etc., or the (number of) people watching or listening to a particular television or radio programme, or reading a particular book:
She lectures to audiences all over the world.
The secret to public speaking is to get the audience on your side.
The audience was/were clearly delighted with the performance.
The magic show had a lot of audience participation, with people shouting things to the performers and going up on stage.
The television company has lost a large part of its audience (= the group of people who watch its programmes) since it changed its programming.
Her latest book should appeal to a large audience (= many people will want to read it).
(from Cambridge Advanced Learner's Dictionary)
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翻譯腔2007.12.15
受眾，是中國對於媒體接受者(觀眾/聽眾/讀者)的翻譯。
"不過﹐“中國製造”聲望的嚴重滑坡不僅威脅了中國自己的經濟﹐也威脅了進口中國商品的西方企業。在那些愈發贊同採取一定措施保護本土市場的消費者中﹐外國製造商不誠實的形像找到了很好的受眾。對中國商品信任的喪失也可能為全球貿易系統帶來負面影響。"
audience (GROUP OF PEOPLE) Show phonetics
group noun [C]
the group of people gathered in one place to watch or listen to a play, film, someone speaking, etc., or the (number of) people watching or listening to a particular television or radio programme, or reading a particular book:
She lectures to audiences all over the world.
The secret to public speaking is to get the audience on your side.
The audience was/were clearly delighted with the performance.
The magic show had a lot of audience participation, with people shouting things to the performers and going up on stage.
The television company has lost a large part of its audience (= the group of people who watch its programmes) since it changed its programming.
Her latest book should appeal to a large audience (= many people will want to read it).
(from Cambridge Advanced Learner's Dictionary)
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翻譯腔2007.12.15
十年前我的一位朋友對我說，我的翻譯作品和一般文章讀起來味道不太一樣。換句話說，前者還沒達化境，還有『翻譯腔 』。
『翻譯腔』 可能是腐敗我們的作品的主要原因。
今天翻『南北朝文學史』（北京：人民文學出版社，1991），讀到：「中國文學史上有意識地大量運用擬人手法…….謝靈運應當是最早的一位作家。」（第52頁：中國文學史上有意識地大量運用擬人手法…….謝靈運應當是最早的。）
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